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  2. crumpledpapercranes says:
    February 9, 2015 at 4:50 pm

    Intense and at the same time, a serene read for me. I enjoyed this very much.

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  4. bego1978 says:
    February 9, 2015 at 9:20 pm

    I enjoy reading your blog. This post is excellent. Keep writing 🙂

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  5. Foghorn The IKonoclast says:
    February 9, 2015 at 11:24 pm

    Nice legs and I love the look overall.

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  6. vivachange77 says:
    February 10, 2015 at 9:47 am

    I love the line ” I live dot to dot, crayon soul.” Your poetry has a quality of being just out of my mind’s reach while your images and words make sense to my imagination. You are a poet.

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  8. Helen says:
    February 10, 2015 at 8:41 pm

    Very nice imagery.

    And thanks for following my blog
    Cheers!

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  9. Shakti Ghosal says:
    February 11, 2015 at 2:46 am

    I found the verse intense and beautifully aligned with the image.

    The lines that jumped out at me are:

    “What are these covering daubs, that
    Hide myself? I have dwelt in
    Darkness null, colorless lava…..”

    Indeed what is it that makes us cover ourselves and show up as someone we are not? Why this need to show up in line with others’ expectations of us?

    Shakti

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  10. alotfromlydia says:
    February 11, 2015 at 8:58 am

    Hi, I really enjoy your work, and as such have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. No need to respond, and you may do with it what you will. If you’d like to participate, follow this link for the rules. Awards | A lot from Lydia https://alotfromlydia.wordpress.com/awards/
    If not please just accept my compliments. 😉

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  11. mvblake says:
    February 12, 2015 at 2:08 pm

    I loved this; the style, the choice of words, so evocative
    “Oh her hair, her hair, I swear
    Is layered gold,”

    Beautiful and raw at the same time

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  12. Joy says:
    February 13, 2015 at 12:24 pm

    Oh…I really like this. A little jarring, a lot beautiful. Thanks for stopping by my online home, and for following my blog – I truly appreciate it.

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  13. Miz-Morality says:
    February 13, 2015 at 7:00 pm

    Amazing, jst amazing….

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  14. Gary Scott Gebert says:
    March 22, 2015 at 3:01 pm

    You got me hooked now –

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