What a brilliant poem…the memories flicker like flames…loved the poem.
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Elan — it’s good! Really good!
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Beautiful. I loved the photos that you used.
Wow. That sounds like it came right out of your memory. Beautiful.
It sounded awesome dude. Can’t wait to read the next one!
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Free flow of expression…A real touch of flame..excellent
I really love the image of the jars of fruit. Also the idea of the sand or the sun burning, a bit like the duality of the dancer or the dance in Yeats’ ‘sailing to Byzantium’ i think, let me check that.
Ain’t love a powerful thing? It gives you all you NEED to feel to EXPLODE! 🙂
This is so beautiful! I loved this so much! 😀 :*
Wow, simply amazing. Your words evoke emotions from me that I didn’t know I
produced, impressive. Kudos.
I enjoyed reading your beautifully worded poem.
Elan, it is truly refreshing to see such depth and word craft.
Such depth – a brilliant write!
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