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19 Responses to Published

  1. slpmartin says:

    What a brilliant poem…the memories flicker like flames…loved the poem.

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  2. domusgrata says:

    Elan — it’s good! Really good!

    Liked by 2 people

  3. pattyalcala says:

    Beautiful. I loved the photos that you used.

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  4. calensariel says:

    Wow. That sounds like it came right out of your memory. Beautiful.

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  5. phengblog says:

    It sounded awesome dude. Can’t wait to read the next one!

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  6. Free flow of expression…A real touch of flame..excellent

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  7. ronankirby79 says:

    I really love the image of the jars of fruit. Also the idea of the sand or the sun burning, a bit like the duality of the dancer or the dance in Yeats’ ‘sailing to Byzantium’ i think, let me check that.

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  8. Ain’t love a powerful thing? It gives you all you NEED to feel to EXPLODE! 🙂

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  9. sumedha13 says:

    This is so beautiful! I loved this so much! 😀 :*

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  10. Ryen says:

    Wow, simply amazing. Your words evoke emotions from me that I didn’t know I
    produced, impressive. Kudos.

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  11. finleysmom says:

    I enjoyed reading your beautifully worded poem.

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  12. Elan, it is truly refreshing to see such depth and word craft.

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  13. Such depth – a brilliant write!

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