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30 Responses to Published

  1. Very Beautiful and meaningful.


  2. sirenaross says:

    I love the rain and this story

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  3. How romantic … the rain has always been beautiful … 🙂

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  4. calensariel says:

    What a fascinating conversation in the rain. Your portraits are like snapshots themselves.

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  5. Ah, I love this story!


  6. grantman says:

    very nice taking all the emotions of aging an maturing thru ones long life of love and living and tie it into the dances of so many rains….

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  7. blkkat49 says:

    Beautiful story. It felt the way a story would read while sitting in front of a warm fire with a loved one, listening to raindrops falling on a metal roof. Don’t know why a metal roof. That’s the sound I hear when I close my eyes and picture the lovers walking in the rain.

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  8. Penticular says:

    Let It Rain, enjoyed this immensely.

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  9. Jahsonaj says:

    Rain is the best… Inside and out…

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  10. Rendered me speechless. Will say its the best post I have read in a while.

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  11. Love the photo at the end too. Not really a rainy day story.mvery touching.

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  12. This is gorgeous, endlessly evocative in the selectiveness of scene and setting told only through dialogue.


  13. Rose Red says:

    Your writing gives me chills. The way you knit all the words together is just magical


  14. Wow. I love the contrast, meaning, and metaphors in this piece. Do you have books? I’ll buy it.


  15. So beautiful, thanks for sharing : )

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  16. rcasey89 says:

    I love your style of writing, it’s beautiful. I’m looking forward to reading more


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