One Day Only
Posted on May 8, 2015
by Elan Mudrow
25 Comments

I look through the window
The store was, my shop
Isles of numb
Sprawling endlessness
There are no eyes anymore
We shop only for a deal
Priced for less than it’s worth
Bargain and sliced, a mantra
One day only
Coupons shine like the sun
Food is a box
Pizzas are frozen
Hamburgers are forbidden
I am now chicken skin
We eat labels, warnings
Our stare, altered desire
In hands that were warm
Reaching into the frozen section
How can this throbbing
Extend so far up?
Where are our skulls?
I am made in the image of sex
Wet on demand, curved
Fingers thumb through
Discounts posing as books
Containing only images.
Ads are now read as words
Our lovers must learn the gaze
My pants have blood on them
Spicy tomato pasted on me
We are spilt, pungent, sweet
Wiping frantically, away,
But the smell is here
I am forever, almost,
In my ability to grab.
Our strangling reaches
expert levels of covering up
Realness, a nest hidden
among a marked down reason

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What the!?? Delightfully weird. Love it!!
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Thanks so much!
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Yep! You’re gifted 😀
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The third stanza was fantastic, well done indeed, we have ourselves become products.
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“We eat labels, warnings” – stunning turn of phrase, and so true.
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I really enjoyed reading this, wonderfully written.
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Thanks very much for looking.
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You inspire me!! Beautiful!! 🙂 🙂
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Disturbing thoughts well written.
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It is very thought provoking.
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Your poetry is never simple. The beauty is in it’s complexity, and you always have such interesting photos.
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You got it.
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What and interesting walk, for one day only… :o)
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You’ve done it again! Blew me away. So true and so well delivered. Cheers ~
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Thanks for your comment and honesty. Are photos and images linear? Is poetry? It’s funny how love and shopping have things in common, such as space and time. Maybe they share more than those two things.
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I like the these two lines:
We shop only for a deal
Priced for less than it’s worth
but have to admit to not understanding the poem but like the flow of images. The last photo is just fabulous; such texture. It looks like a salt print but the era seems to be too late for this.
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Thanks!
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Wow! Really interesting evolution of context and mood. Nicely done.
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Reblogged this on Stevie Lynn.
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“We eat labels, warnings…” Gawd, isn’t that the truth!
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Ha! Welcome to post-modernism/modernism. Gotta love what Industrialism has done to humanity and the world eh. Classic piece here. And love the second photo.
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