Smidgens
Posted on May 11, 2015 by Elan Mudrow
Category: Poetry, Short SayingsTags: Author, Forest, Magic, Nature, Poem, Poetry, Rain, Running, Writing
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This brought back so many memories of my tropical childhood, that sense of wishing yearning longing for the heavy warm rain to fall again, so that running through the trees is always associated with that yearning feeling.
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beautiful …
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I think it’s simply beautiful how in such few lines you managed to grab the reader, made us feel the rain, and left us wanting for more.. a “more” which, actually we already know cuz we all have been running under that same rain.
Beautifully written in my opinion. 🙂
I’ll make sure to come here often *internet hugs* heh
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I love the idea of being abandoned by the rain. It’s so original. Great poem, I too wanted more.
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nice. sweet.
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I remember that well. #BornOregonian
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Chasing after the rain…wow, never though of it.
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Thanks
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Very picturesque. The words are moving, and the pictures are certainly thought-provoking. Thanks!
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Love this one 🙂 thank you for providing the images that it does… Conjures up all kinds of memories.
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Reblogged this on Forever Ago.
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Through your words and images it’s a pleasing scene but it really made me think of another sense – after a fresh rain in the forest…one of my favorite smells.
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I like to imagine the dripping leaves after the rain as a little shower of their own. Refreshing poetry..
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Reblogged this on Anita.com.
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Thanks!
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Reblogged this on gourafotadar and commented:
This is wonderful. I am re-blogging it because I appreciate it so much. Thank you for writing!
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Thanks
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Great post. I love those photos!
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There’s nothing like running in the rain. Thanks for the images.
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I just love his, words and picture! so lovely!! Michelle
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Left me wanting more.
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We must begin to teach them…
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