Posted on May 18, 2015
by Elan Mudrow
Ones that have touched me
With a smile
Soft and warm
Lips that have spoken
Straight talk heard
The shape of a cry
Salt river, running down
To each end of your kiss
Sternness crumpled up
In a wrinkle
Of anger held in
Into raw eruption
Hiding a tongue
To search for my inner secrets
Bitten in frustration
Back to life, healed
Brushed by fingers
Trust built of tender breath
Lips heated, a hotness
I have been opened
Hushed by the myriad
Speaks outside the turn
Lips form our orbit
Paper notes from distance
Category: PoetryTags: Author, Lips, Love, Makeup, Poem, Poetry, Romance, Writer, Writing
Great presentation! Congrats!
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thank you for stopping by my blog.. ever so grateful for it has guided me here, to your words. Your poetry is breathtaking.
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I’m obsessed with the line, “hiding a tongue who dares to search for my inner secrets.”
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Who knew a tongue could do so much? I love the visceral feel of the poem.
Really enjoyed “trust built of tender breath”. Really pretty line. Excellent sound, moving in a visceral way.
Absolutely beautiful and moving. Glad to connect.
I enjoyed this wonderful piece. Great job. Blessings.
This is just remarkable, a job well done on this!!!
Liked the play on words at the end!
Lovely progression of thought in your poetry. I like the Evening in Paris ad.
Beautifully expressed. And that Satan ad at the end, brilliant !
yes. well said.
That Satanic ad is priceless! 🙂
Showing the Tenderness that lies within you. Well spoken indeed !
Hello, Friend. This is gorgeous! It is very BIG in a svelte and compact form.
This is a lovely poem. I like a woman’s lips and smile. The images, as always, are great.
So very beautiful! Loved it.
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I love this poem!!
I enjoyed your thoughts you painted with
Take Care…You Matter…
powerful, beautiful, and sensual!!!
Lovely poem. 😀
I’ve always looked at people’s eyes first, then their hands. I may have to add lips to the list now!
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