Honey Bunches Of Woes



Cap’n Crunch is part of

Military-industrial cornplex

Shredded wheat is, well, shredded

Post Toasties are shy

But, very modernist.

Life should not be simply cereal

And taken more seriously!

Wheaties get wimpy in milk

Lucky Charms ain’t so lucky

With those alien marshmallows

Rising to the top of the cereal hierarchy

Has anyone really cheered for Cheerios?

No wonder there is a Honey Nut

You can’t just frost a flake

Once a flake always a flake

What’s so special about K?

I’m sure J is special too

Are Bite-Size Mini Wheats

for small mouths?

What is Total adding up to?

Corn should not be a Pop

Or a Mom for that matter

Corn Moms?

Who would turn Trix in their stomach?

Cocoa Pebbles is like

Eating a baby Flintstone

Apple Jacks are drugs

Kix are boring little balls of cardboard

Don’t let Raisin Bran fool you

Into thinking it’s a goody two-shoes

It’s into getting frosted and toasted too

Alpha Bits.

Don’t spell with your mouth full

Chex should practice contraception

Never listen to Snap, Crackle, and Pop.

They’re corporate whores

Does sugar really need to puff?

Grape Nuts.

Only some parts are edible

Franken Berry, Boo Berry

If berries crunch

Don’t eat them

No wonder, there are toy surprises

Honey Bunches of Woes



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41 Responses to Honey Bunches Of Woes

  1. Victoria says:

    Such a creative and fun post, thank you!


  2. skat says:

    As a child, I was only permitted a sugary cereal once or twice a year. My favourite cereal was Shredded Wheat with boiling water poured on top and drained, then sprinkled with sugar and drowned in milk. Now I’m a vegan; I prefer organic, grain-cereal with fresh fruit and soy milk.
    I did like this poem; it was a nostalgic journey. Captain Crunch was my favourite, by the way.

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  3. reocochran says:

    There is something different about K!


  4. calensariel says:

    Big grin! I love these. They remind me of Dr. Seuss books. LOL

    Liked by 1 person

  5. WOW. thats all i can think of

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  6. OldenGray says:

    The entire lot is pure “Poison”. Those companies are killing people and they fool us with their marketing programs. Anyway, The Illegitimate Rice Crispy, “Snap, crackle and no pop”. A great read, by the way. Such truths in a fun way!


  7. loveandwanderingfeet says:

    so true, you should NEVER eat a berry if it’s crunchy! great poem!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. lumenuniverse says:

    Hehe i love this, the opening line is even funnier if you know who captin crunch of the phone phreakers is!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. This made me laugh! 😀


  10. vivachange77 says:

    Clever and funny. But how could you forget Kashi?


  11. R.H. Dahl says:

    Thanks for this post Elan! So fun, so creative and so true in many ways! Very much enjoyed this =)

    Liked by 1 person

  12. cliff445 says:

    Very creative! I go fruit-loopy when I think of all the crap they try to feed our kids! Btw. I was a big fan of that marshmellow leprecaun poop when I was a lad. 😉

    Liked by 1 person

  13. flowerpoet says:

    Hilarious! Many thanks.

    Liked by 1 person

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  15. nikibayard says:

    Ha Ha Genius 🙂 I was only playing with the serial cereal the other day!


  16. nikibayard says:

    Reblogged this on Niki Bayard and commented:
    Seriously Serial Cereal humour!


  17. In England after the war we had only puffed wheat, cornflakes and Weetabix as I remember. There are so many more now but not as many as in the USA. The big growth seems to be in Free From and “Healthy” brands.


  18. Idacity says:

    Since I was a child, photos of clowns have always left me feeling unsettled, and many years later, they still do. But, I’m glad that I stuck with your poem (in spite the clown image at the start), and read it to completition. Clever and funny — it was a delightful read.

    Cheer(io)s 😉

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  19. Laurie Welch says:

    Nice word play. I think I’ll skip breakfast! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Michele Walfred says:

    A great Osted Poastie!

    Liked by 1 person

  21. loveleemarie says:

    This made my day.

    Liked by 1 person

  22. Thank you for liking “Seeking the Divine.” I enjoyed your sense of humor in this poem, but I also like its serious message. I think I ate nearly every cereal you mentioned in this poem when I was a child. I was brainwashed into eating them by all the fun and colorful cereal commercials I saw on TV. I did not realize just how bad all that sugary processed food is until I got older. Over the years, I have learned that some corporations don’t care if they sell low-quality, unhealthy, and in some cases unsafe products to people as long as they make a profit.


  23. cremedelauren says:

    I’m loving this one. Similar to one reader, my mother rarely allowed me to eat the sugary kids cereals, and for that, I thank her. Even the “healthier” sounding ones like Raisin Bran are misleading as you pointed out. There needs to be a cereal killer so we can wipe out these baddies.

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  24. rescloset22 says:

    This was absolutely magical. . . .*dramatic clap*


  25. This is a new venture, so it’s very generous of you for being supportive. As a cereal lover, Honey Bunches of Woes made me smile!


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