Elan Mudrow
Smidgens
Waking Is Ours
I have entered
So many nights
With you
Entrusted my sleep
To your closed eyes
Accepted your heat
Under shared blankets
Buried my head
In the pillows
of your absence
Your scent is mine
Waking is ours
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Beautiful writing!
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Exquisite words and images.
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Thanks
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It is rare to find anything sensual without vulgarity. Thank you for words that create beautiful images and thoughts.
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Reblogged this on William Chasterson.
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… brought a genuine smile… I know the feeling.
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I think you’re right about it being staged. Never the less, quite a nice picture.
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No one, I’m familiar with. I think the photo is newer than it appears. It’s a bit staged.
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Wonderful poem. I love the photo at the top. Is that someone famous?
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Thanks, but I respectfully decline.
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You do have a way with words…this is a lovely, moving piece.
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beautiful piece of writing… 🙂
I have nominated you for Very Inspiring Blogger Award… check here https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2015/06/08/very-inspiring-blogger-award/ 🙂
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maaayyjor like!
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Sensuous!
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A poem that engages the senses as on reads each line. I really enjoyed reading it
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So tender and warm. A beautiful sense of enveloping love “waking together”.
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They told me I was too dense to understand poetry. But I understood this. And then I fell in love with it too. I guess they did not know how poetry was supposed to be.
These lines are beautiful, with an even more beautiful after taste.
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Nice
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A beautiful poem. What is more comforting than sleeping with the one you love? Nothing I think!
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“Entrusted my sleep To your closed eyes”… “Buried my head
In the pillows of your absence”… WOW! Beautifully put! Loved it!
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Thanks, so much!
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You bring alive the intimacy, total surrender, yet a bit wistful. I simply love the closing line Elan
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Little Joe Montana. Population 3
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Sweet.
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Very sensual, Elan, like French would say, Oh là là. 🙂
But also spiritual and reminds me of a quote by Rumi: “Poetry can be dangerous, especially beautiful poetry, because it gives the illusion of having had the experience without actually going through it.”
Enjoying your creativity.
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Thanks, my friend.
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So simple and young lovish. Beautiful. Great pix, too.
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You are a lucky person!
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Makes me think of my nights with my wife, whom I love dearly. Very nice.
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Beautiful mood
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Thanks
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Absolutely beautiful!
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very nice…..good image and words
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Thanks. Your comment tastes good.
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Elegant sexuality, tastefully portrayed.
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Thanks
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yes, this is delicious!
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Delicious !
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Lovely Photo and delicate poem.
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delicately beautiful 🙂
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