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48 Responses to Published

  1. Deborah Moss says:

    A brilliant poem.

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  2. Bushka says:

    Powerful, expressive and evocative. Most telling line:
    ‘This night is full of last breaths.’ 👍🏽

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  3. countingsheepstudio says:

    This is a hauntingly beautiful poem, one to ponder on for days.

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  4. cote8050 says:

    Wow, this poem is amazing, so moving and the blogger about is right, one to think about… thank you. Michelle

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  5. stuartmbuck says:

    really nice visceral poem. agree with the line ‘this night is full of last breaths’ being a winner.

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  6. Susan D. Durham says:

    You’ve expressed this in ways no op-ed piece or talking head could dream of touching. Brilliant.

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  7. Somebody says:

    Very nice! (And btw: I love the art you choose to go along with your words.)

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  8. Nurse Kelly says:

    The images you convey with your words are just so real – the depth of feeling, your feelings, really translate. Just brilliant 🙂

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  9. Very evocative and disturbing at the same time, and touching to find some grace amid turmoil.
    Is this from experience, or feelings?
    Either way, well done Elan.

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  10. grantman says:

    This piece took me back to when I used to live in Washington, D.C. ..not uncommon to hear shooting at night…you captured that feeling of fear and the shortness of breath and life beautifully…nice job
    Grantman

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  11. Renee Lishka says:

    Very thought provoking and relatable.

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  12. charlenekez says:

    Words woven wonderfully… nice post!

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  13. neerja2014 says:

    Evocative, provocative, brilliant. I love the lines

    “Does breathing know things…

    I don’t know? …. Like…

    Being scared, being prepared.”
    If we allowed ourselves, subconsciously we would know the right actions.

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  15. neerja2014 says:

    I wrote blogpost Breat of Life – https://neerja2014.wordpress.com/ with a pingback to you.

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  16. matt says:

    This is wonderful, well done! I love how you explore the connection between breathing and so many others things – two people, the present, the future.

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  17. cbeckwith32 says:

    This poem hurts in the best way.

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  18. Jack Motley says:

    Oh my, you have some wonderful poetry, Elan. I’d like to follow you to learn more about the craft from you.

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  19. Wow, once again powerful commentary on life in America in the 21st Century, how sad for us and even sadder for the victims and their families.

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  20. Fun Simplicity says:

    HI Elan, I’ve nominated you for Premio Dardos Award. Cheers! (https://icareucareblog.wordpress.com/2015/08/15/blessing-12-premio-dardos-award/)

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  21. Sharron says:

    Exquisitely meaningful poetry. It felt like it jut flowed from your heart.
    Yes, all lives matter and we see them drift away in so many different ways.

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  22. vivachange77 says:

    Powerful, beautiful words about the simplest and most essential things. It is heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time.

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  23. petraperkov says:

    Your words are simply riveting.

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  24. I wish I could write this beautifully..!! Mesmerizing ❤

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  25. Joyful2bee says:

    Poignant words that portray so much! Wow!

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  26. Ralph says:

    Besides touching the guts of us all, these words might find a wall in many Trauma Centers and ER’s . ….Proud…..

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  28. skat says:

    This photo is familiar; is it Irish Archives? Some of those old black and whit shots make great jumping off points. This is a great poem.

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  29. LAMarcom says:

    Bravo!
    I like this.
    A lot.
    Cheers,
    Lance

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  30. pen4fantasy says:

    It’s as if the words acquire life in your poetry.
    Using your own title, I’m tempted to add, in your art, ‘All Words Matter.’
    For, each silent space between the words feels like a breath spent in worthy reflection.

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  31. Very well-expressed. A beautiful and powerful piece!

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  32. Ink Pastries says:

    WOW, and I was just outside listening to crickets and stars breathe before I came in and read this. Great poem.

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  33. michnavs says:

    filled with emotions……

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