Elan Mudrow
Smidgens
Missing Sweets
I kiss no more.
You wonder why?
Since, it is so easy.
I’ve lost something.
You kissing me back.
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This is simply wonderful, well stated, loving your blog so far!
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Brilliant. You expressed a great deal of emotions in just a few words. That picture corresponds very well with your state of mind. Well written. Btw, thanks for liking my poem. God bless
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I am totally in this zone…ur poem hit a nerve…with its straightness and shortness and magical simplicity.
Some times that’s all one needs…to be kissed back. No sophistication.
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A wonderful piece. Short and concise. All the more powerful for it.
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Nope, none needed. Thanks.
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Love the simplicity of this, there’s no embellishment needed
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smooch smooch!!
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I’d kiss you dear and just as sweet
From your head down to your feet.
Something’s amiss,
That much is true
However I am begging you,
To see this heart through
Truly tender gazing.
Remember how you once thought me amazing?
But apathy now lies
In our unforgiving, apathetic eyes.
Remember me –
The one that you held dear-
Kiss me like that…
And you’ll never have to fear
Me not kissing back.
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Oh lolz look kinda like him.
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No, the photo is from an earlier time period than Grant.
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Nice. Is that cary Grant?
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Wanting, but unwilling to acquire what’s lost. So sad….. GREAT POEM!
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Love this picture.
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Awwww the feels!!!! 😦
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I love that sadness too as well as sweetness… But unfortunately it missing!!
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This has a sad feeling and i enjoyed. Sometimes melancholy is called for. Nicely written!
Danny
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I’ve just nominated your blog for the Premio Dardos Award. Don’t know how you feel about awards, but if anyone deserves it, it would be you. For more info, you can visit my blog. Have a nice day!
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So much said in so little is not easily done. A wonderful little snapshot of sadness and yearning.
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So you love because you want to be loved back.
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The world turned upside down… The saddest thing..
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OK, will do.
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Hi again, would love for you to come visit my site an browse thru a couple of mine, drop me a note maybe? Love to know what you think… Appreciate it!
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Elan, this is just so poignant! Beautifully conceived & crafted!
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Its so wonderful to pack extreme sweetness and sadness in same lines !
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How deeply sad.
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If you’re getting pecked, then you’ve wrongly picked.
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Wonderful. Pecks are not kisses are they?
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So tragically poignant!
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Short, but (ahh) sweet.
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Reblogged this on Kunstkitchen's Blog and commented:
Sharing this wonderful photo and poem. Both are exquisite.Thank you Elan Mudrow.
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Touche, 19 words, I bow.
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Sadness beautifully crafted.
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Beautiful. I loved the thought.
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Hugs 😦
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Yes, I have a hunch.
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Oh god. This is morose.
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Seems so sad, almost like a yearning feeling hear of wanting but not needing.
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The saddest thing.
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I like the thought.
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