I kiss no more.
You wonder why?
Since, it is so easy.
I’ve lost something.
You kissing me back.
I like the thought.
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The saddest thing.
Seems so sad, almost like a yearning feeling hear of wanting but not needing.
Oh god. This is morose.
Yes, I have a hunch.
Beautiful. I loved the thought.
Sadness beautifully crafted.
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Touche, 19 words, I bow.
Short, but (ahh) sweet.
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Sharing this wonderful photo and poem. Both are exquisite.Thank you Elan Mudrow.
So tragically poignant!
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Wonderful. Pecks are not kisses are they?
If you’re getting pecked, then you’ve wrongly picked.
How deeply sad.
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Its so wonderful to pack extreme sweetness and sadness in same lines !
Elan, this is just so poignant! Beautifully conceived & crafted!
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The world turned upside down… The saddest thing..
So you love because you want to be loved back.
So much said in so little is not easily done. A wonderful little snapshot of sadness and yearning.
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This has a sad feeling and i enjoyed. Sometimes melancholy is called for. Nicely written!
I love that sadness too as well as sweetness… But unfortunately it missing!!
Awwww the feels!!!! 😦
Love this picture.
Wanting, but unwilling to acquire what’s lost. So sad….. GREAT POEM!
Nice. Is that cary Grant?
No, the photo is from an earlier time period than Grant.
Oh lolz look kinda like him.
I’d kiss you dear and just as sweet
From your head down to your feet.
That much is true
However I am begging you,
To see this heart through
Truly tender gazing.
Remember how you once thought me amazing?
But apathy now lies
In our unforgiving, apathetic eyes.
Remember me –
The one that you held dear-
Kiss me like that…
And you’ll never have to fear
Me not kissing back.
Love the simplicity of this, there’s no embellishment needed
Nope, none needed. Thanks.
A wonderful piece. Short and concise. All the more powerful for it.
I am totally in this zone…ur poem hit a nerve…with its straightness and shortness and magical simplicity.
Some times that’s all one needs…to be kissed back. No sophistication.
Brilliant. You expressed a great deal of emotions in just a few words. That picture corresponds very well with your state of mind. Well written. Btw, thanks for liking my poem. God bless
This is simply wonderful, well stated, loving your blog so far!
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