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31 Responses to Published

  1. Beautiful writing! Loved it.

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  2. Talia Hardy says:

    I adore the meditative tone, Elan, Would you like to submit this to The Calais Writers Group? If so, send all contributions for consideration to: as attachments in Times Roman 12


  3. Bushka says:

    Meditative mood…enhanced by evocative imagery……Yes! Lovely!


  4. cliff445 says:

    Beautiful imagery and deft turn of phrase, atruly delightful piece!

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  5. Hi I really love this, I am running an anthology in support of the Calais refugees. I would love to feature yours. It will be running for at least a month.


  6. Deborah Moss says:

    Loved it and the last two lines made goosebumps erupt.


  7. Q says:

    Loved this ๐Ÿ™‚


  8. “Our feet caught, sinking under the mush of leftover tides” – brilliant!


  9. Sad, gripping, reality. Where is humanity? Probably drowned I’m the Mediterranean Sea… RIP Aylan Kurdi ๐Ÿ’”


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  11. skat says:

    Thank you! Your poem has broken a long-wrestled-with block. I have given you the credit here:

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  12. vivachange77 says:

    Beautiful hints of comfort and being lost. The picture is haunting because of memories it touches.


  13. Reblogged this on EdwardianPiano and commented:
    Another inspiring piece of writing by Elan Mudrow.

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  14. JayKLMNOPee says:

    This is awesome. What a great work of literature ๐Ÿ˜‰


  15. Iwundu Wisdom says:

    Excellent. The other side of eternity.


  16. Love it! Beautiful imagery.


  17. daisyawiti says:

    This is simply beautiful!


  18. meshelkelly says:

    beautiful and a bit sad…


  19. Beautiful is just one word that comes to mind.


  20. With lips we press hard because we are not thinking of past or future but of holding on in the present.


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