Passion hits me
On the side
Of my emotions
All I can do is check for bruises
Interesting piece Elan
Bittersweet musing !
i am here the little boy saying: “Some day!”… this is great work and what a great photo to accompany it…
Yes, passion can be ruthless. 😉
consider being lucky that passion hits , otherwise it is not a passion
That picture is an amazing find. Full of emotion–frustration and hope. Lo I like your poem. Left me wanting more. One tiny suggestion: On this side of my emotions (If it doesn’t change your meaning).
Thanks, I’ll consider your suggestion.
Really loved this one!
Love the picture!!! Talking of guts and passion, the picture reminds me of the passion fruit hanging up there so high but no matter for optimistic eyes.
Short, sweet and a direct shot to the point. I must learn how to say more with less words. 🙂
i absolutely love this
twas very powerful..
You and I…. We are alike.
What’s a passion worth chasing for if it does not come with bruises? 😊
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So few words, but definitely a powerful poem. Nice work!!
Very very nice!
I really like this, the words are really powerful.
Beautiful little piece. Thank you
I am curious; do you start with a poem or a picture? The picture you chose is always so perfect for your poem.
I write the poem first and then begin a search for a photo that fits any one of its themes. This can take a long time. Thanks. Unfortunately, the published poems don’t and will not have the images.
Forget the bruises. You are getting stronger. Hit back harder…. For you are still holding onto your passion 🙂
I love this
There’s no escape from passion!
Great photo to go with this post. 🙂 If your passion isn’t fulfilled…keep trying!
this is stunningly beautiful and I mean that ❤
great work 🙂
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