Elan Mudrow
Smidgens
Gut Feeling
Passion hits me
Hard, deep
for keeps
On the side
Of my emotions
All I can do is check for bruises
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Elan Mudrow 
great work 🙂
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Splendid
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this is stunningly beautiful and I mean that ❤
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Great photo to go with this post. 🙂 If your passion isn’t fulfilled…keep trying!
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There’s no escape from passion!
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I love this
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Inspiring
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Forget the bruises. You are getting stronger. Hit back harder…. For you are still holding onto your passion 🙂
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Well written
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I write the poem first and then begin a search for a photo that fits any one of its themes. This can take a long time. Thanks. Unfortunately, the published poems don’t and will not have the images.
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I am curious; do you start with a poem or a picture? The picture you chose is always so perfect for your poem.
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Beautiful little piece. Thank you
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Elegant.
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I really like this, the words are really powerful.
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Very very nice!
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So few words, but definitely a powerful poem. Nice work!!
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What’s a passion worth chasing for if it does not come with bruises? 😊
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You and I…. We are alike.
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twas very powerful..
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i absolutely love this
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Short, sweet and a direct shot to the point. I must learn how to say more with less words. 🙂
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K-O!
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Love the picture!!! Talking of guts and passion, the picture reminds me of the passion fruit hanging up there so high but no matter for optimistic eyes.
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Thanks, I’ll consider your suggestion.
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Really loved this one!
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That picture is an amazing find. Full of emotion–frustration and hope. Lo I like your poem. Left me wanting more. One tiny suggestion: On this side of my emotions (If it doesn’t change your meaning).
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consider being lucky that passion hits , otherwise it is not a passion
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Yes, passion can be ruthless. 😉
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i am here the little boy saying: “Some day!”… this is great work and what a great photo to accompany it…
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Bittersweet musing !
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Fascinating
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Interesting piece Elan
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