Oh, your poem is so ethereal and mystical that I don’t have the right words to express the appreciation for the beauty! The image says a lot.
Have a lovely Friday and weekend.
Love and light ❤
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‘Mad electricity’…….’Bad connections’? 😉
“now, my first argument/ must be done alone”, so true.
This poem is really cool… the words are so playful. Thanks for sharing.
Ah, I like the stinger and wings line best.
ur writing ability is much above than I cud have imagined… expressive bloke
Delightful, as always full of images, feelings and thought provoking words. Hugs!
Resonant. Paper hives says it all…
Circular thinking. Great poem!
Great imagery here. I especially like “…honeycomb verse…” and “…paper hives…” The conclusion is great too, and leaves you with an introspection and a little bit of a haunting feeling. I like it more the more I read it.
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The picture crackles with “mad electricity”. Your images buzz like a bee whirring around. Lovely coming home to yourself in the end.
Very cleaver and sweet!
“I’m stuck like sticky honey to / My silent words”
This has so many original ways to help us look at our beeness. Great poem and have got to it again via Dverse poets and the poetry pub.
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