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17 Responses to Published

  1. Vibrant says:

    Oh, your poem is so ethereal and mystical that I don’t have the right words to express the appreciation for the beauty! The image says a lot.

    Thanks Elan.
    Have a lovely Friday and weekend.

    Love and light ❤
    Anand 🙂

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  2. Bushka says:

    ‘Mad electricity’…….’Bad connections’? 😉

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  3. BeeHappee says:

    “now, my first argument/ must be done alone”, so true.


  4. mr gahon says:

    This poem is really cool… the words are so playful. Thanks for sharing.

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  5. Erica Herd says:

    Ah, I like the stinger and wings line best.


  6. Sona Rulz says:

    ur writing ability is much above than I cud have imagined… expressive bloke


  7. Joyful2bee says:

    Delightful, as always full of images, feelings and thought provoking words. Hugs!


  8. nexi says:

    Resonant. Paper hives says it all…

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  9. annkantx says:

    Circular thinking. Great poem!


  10. deluvian says:

    Great imagery here. I especially like “…honeycomb verse…” and “…paper hives…” The conclusion is great too, and leaves you with an introspection and a little bit of a haunting feeling. I like it more the more I read it.


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  12. vivachange77 says:

    The picture crackles with “mad electricity”. Your images buzz like a bee whirring around. Lovely coming home to yourself in the end.


  13. Candid 'n' Candy says:

    Lovable expressions.


  14. Mara B. says:

    Very cleaver and sweet!


  15. Katrina says:

    “I’m stuck like sticky honey to / My silent words”



  16. This has so many original ways to help us look at our beeness. Great poem and have got to it again via Dverse poets and the poetry pub.


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