17 Comments on “Published

  1. Oh, your poem is so ethereal and mystical that I don’t have the right words to express the appreciation for the beauty! The image says a lot.

    Thanks Elan.
    Have a lovely Friday and weekend.

    Love and light ❤
    Anand 🙂

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  2. ur writing ability is much above than I cud have imagined… expressive bloke


  3. Great imagery here. I especially like “…honeycomb verse…” and “…paper hives…” The conclusion is great too, and leaves you with an introspection and a little bit of a haunting feeling. I like it more the more I read it.


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  5. The picture crackles with “mad electricity”. Your images buzz like a bee whirring around. Lovely coming home to yourself in the end.


  6. This has so many original ways to help us look at our beeness. Great poem and have got to it again via Dverse poets and the poetry pub.


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