Superb image….Superb reflection! 😉
“Hearing you beneath my shoe”–nailed it! Wonderful sensory images.
loved the last three lines.
I really enjoyed reading your poem.
“If my wet mouth
I would kiss you
With sugar saliva
Until your skin revives”
You have wrapped autumn in poetry. Beautiful.
Wonderful, thank you for sharing. 🙂
As the others said, superb poem. I adore these lines:
“I stepped cautiously
Hearing you beneath
My shoe, upon your spine
I searched for strength…”
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Thanks, so much!
Never disappointed in your creativity. This is am autumn gem 🙂
Beautiful poem, amazing picture!
This is absolutely superb. I’ve read it again and again… wonderful words, intense imagery, visceral visions. Can’t click like often enough for this one.
I am deeply flattered. Thanks so much!
Beautiful imagery and your words evoked a deep melancholy in me.
The last three lines are very special. I actually said ‘ahhh’….
Great commentary on our condition.
I like this intriguing, insightful and somehow romantic poetry. Well done!
I really like this part:
“…An aging, mingled
With every smaller
Wobble of the globe…”
Wonderful imagery. i’m glad there are still beetles and caterpillars in the end.
I love it 🙂
Your poetry speaks a language all its own. Your images lead me to see ordinary things in a different way. Prose just doesn’t do it to say how much I enjoy reading your blog so I have nominated you for the Creative Blogger Award. See below:
I am honored. I will give it some thought.
I love this.
Loved this one Elan. For you, my own inadequate comments on an “ugly fall”, written while living in Kentucky: “Every now and then the wind brings to the Daniel Boonery – the patch of remnant forest that guards the hill – a foretaste of what’s to come and its trees respond with a collective shudder, shedding worn fragments of summer’s glory in showers of brown and ochre, grave clothes for the butterflies that just a few short weeks ago danced in their hundreds over our hillside medder.”
I like it. Thanks Frank
Wow. And those last three lines especially are so vivid and memorable.
Very captivating 😊 and love that photo!
Such captivating imagery!! You have a true gift!
Photo composition is exceptional.
This is absolutely stunning. Poetic prose at its best 🙂
Fall Fell Haiku
Fall fell, hurt its knee
From golden leaves made plasters
Fast it was to heal
“Hearing you beneath
My shoe, upon your spine”
Chilling, beautiful and haunting at the same time!
I too especially liked these lines: I stepped cautiously
My shoe, upon your spine
…Thanks for following me today. I am so glad your ‘follow’ led me to find you. I am already a fan of your poetry.
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Tasty & So very sweet!
Also, thanks for visiting my blog and liking “My Mountain of Imagination” post. I really appreciate it.
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