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Zvaella Deiventart

Zvaella Deiventart

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43 Responses to Published

  1. Bushka says:

    Superb image….Superb reflection! 😉

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  2. Nimmi says:

    Beautiful!! 🙂

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  3. Erin K. says:

    “Hearing you beneath my shoe”–nailed it! Wonderful sensory images.

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  4. BeeHappee says:

    loved the last three lines.

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  5. wernerbjorn says:

    I really enjoyed reading your poem.

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  6. spedbug says:

    “If my wet mouth
    Quenched you
    I would kiss you
    With sugar saliva
    Until your skin revives”

    Gorgeous.

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  7. Red Tree says:

    You have wrapped autumn in poetry. Beautiful.

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  8. Wonderful, thank you for sharing. 🙂

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  9. Harbour Admin says:

    As the others said, superb poem. I adore these lines:

    “I stepped cautiously

    Hearing you beneath

    My shoe, upon your spine

    I searched for strength…”

    Brilliant imagery!

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  10. Heather says:

    Never disappointed in your creativity. This is am autumn gem 🙂

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  11. Majka says:

    Beautiful poem, amazing picture!

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  12. eonserotica says:

    This is absolutely superb. I’ve read it again and again… wonderful words, intense imagery, visceral visions. Can’t click like often enough for this one.

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  13. Robyn Haynes says:

    Beautiful imagery and your words evoked a deep melancholy in me.

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  14. Gail says:

    The last three lines are very special. I actually said ‘ahhh’….

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  15. Great commentary on our condition.

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  16. Roo's Muse says:

    I like this intriguing, insightful and somehow romantic poetry. Well done!

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  17. Bonnie says:

    I really like this part:

    “…An aging, mingled

    With every smaller

    Wobble of the globe…”

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  18. vivachange77 says:

    Wonderful imagery. i’m glad there are still beetles and caterpillars in the end.

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  19. vivachange77 says:

    Your poetry speaks a language all its own. Your images lead me to see ordinary things in a different way. Prose just doesn’t do it to say how much I enjoy reading your blog so I have nominated you for the Creative Blogger Award. See below:

    https://cronechronicler.wordpress.com/2015/10/17/creative-blogg…ng-a-new-thing/

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  20. frankpovah says:

    Loved this one Elan. For you, my own inadequate comments on an “ugly fall”, written while living in Kentucky: “Every now and then the wind brings to the Daniel Boonery – the patch of remnant forest that guards the hill – a foretaste of what’s to come and its trees respond with a collective shudder, shedding worn fragments of summer’s glory in showers of brown and ochre, grave clothes for the butterflies that just a few short weeks ago danced in their hundreds over our hillside medder.”

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  21. skat says:

    Wow. And those last three lines especially are so vivid and memorable.

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  22. poetryshack says:

    Very captivating 😊 and love that photo!

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  23. Joyful2bee says:

    Such captivating imagery!! You have a true gift!

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  24. cricketmuse says:

    Photo composition is exceptional.

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  25. erinonphyre says:

    This is absolutely stunning. Poetic prose at its best 🙂

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  26. atrmws says:

    Fall Fell Haiku
    by atrmws

    Fall fell, hurt its knee
    From golden leaves made plasters
    Fast it was to heal

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  27. “Hearing you beneath

    My shoe, upon your spine”
    Chilling, beautiful and haunting at the same time!

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  28. I too especially liked these lines: I stepped cautiously

    Hearing you beneath

    My shoe, upon your spine
    …Thanks for following me today. I am so glad your ‘follow’ led me to find you. I am already a fan of your poetry.

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  29. Slavomir Almajan says:

    Reblogged this on Slavomir Almajan's Blog.

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  30. Ad Dawg says:

    Tasty & So very sweet!
    Also, thanks for visiting my blog and liking “My Mountain of Imagination” post. I really appreciate it.

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