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29 Responses to Published

  1. Tina says:

    One word – WOW!

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  2. Love the imagery! Excellent!

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  3. Those last two line are powerful. everyone needs to listen, not only to what they say, but to how the spoken word sounds….

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  4. Kris says:

    so many words in this creating thoughts to shape. this is lovely.

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  5. countingsheepstudio says:

    What a beautiful Journey you take us on here, very powerful words.

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  6. debiriley says:

    Elan, what an exquisite song you write! ‘eyes of glitter, specks of false gold’ reaches right through and connects – well, this entire poem connects. wonderfully moving. cheers, Debi

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  7. Tracey-Lynne says:

    Such a powerful poem, so beautiful in its melancholy.

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  8. JAKA says:

    Love this — just re-blogged

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  9. Robyn Haynes says:

    I especially like the last two lines too.

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  10. trE says:

    I do so enjoy reading your words, especially these lines:

    “Inside a vibration, not only inside me

    But a tremor that runs through all our fault lines

    So, when my ear picked up your tune

    In steps, you read only my face

    In passing, down the hard streets.

    As if maddened, a fear

    In eyes transformed…into

    A Stranger, a wanderer, a person

    A purpose, walking towards me

    That is when the weather….

    For wind has a sound all its own

    Took my singing away.”

    You can flat out write, there’s no debating it. It’s in your veins and the fact that you give us just a bit of it regularly, is amazing. So, thank you.

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  11. wwwpalfitness says:

    Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.

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  12. Brilliant, just plain brilliant!

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  13. Awww …This has cheered me up….Who needs a Paint brush when Pictures can leap out of Words… What a Beauty!

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  14. Fine poem! I read, this is how a poem gets written.

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  15. dunnasead.co says:

    Very impressive. Intuitive, and true. Thank you.

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  16. vivachange77 says:

    Beautiful. I hear the sounds of music of your poetry.

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  17. Deep expressions reflecting your gift and heat. Enjoyed reading and traveling with your thoughts.

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  18. Wow – absolutely love this !

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  19. Wow. Incredible. Beautiful. Blown away.

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  20. ZenPen says:

    Beautiful words!

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  21. This poem brings music alive (reincarnates it even).

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  22. ellecee says:

    I felt I took that walk with you, wonderful imagery and words for reflection

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