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25 Responses to Published

  1. Ralph says:

    Nice. Very nice,


  2. Elizabeth Helmich says:

    ‘Nights that hog stars from city streets’, such a powerful piece. Loved it.

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  3. Loved it. Elizabeth is right, that line is very powerful. So much beauty lost, nature is so energising, electricity? Not so much.


  4. kunstkitchen says:

    Elegantly crafted.


  5. joliesattic says:

    Sweet! Very nice!


  6. thia licona says:

    Good idea! I’ll help you! 🙂


  7. Robyn Haynes says:

    I like that sentiment – planting in the cracks. Lovely!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. smitchjack says:

    That’s beautiful. And now I have tears in my eyes. *sniff*


  9. A // W // F says:

    I love this one … Such strong, evocative images.

    Go you! 🙂


  10. vivachange77 says:

    Tinged with sadness and beautiful.


  11. “On this same asphalt world
    we paved together
    To quell the kicked-up Earth”
    My heart quivered as I read this.


  12. Fijay says:

    Would you?


  13. You paint a picture with words. Beautifully done.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. tristandrue says:

    Wow. I think I’m gonna read this over and over again until my eyes beg for mercy. Me likey.


  15. lisarem says:

    Loved the packed in bits- asphalt/ paved was immediately arresting- the imagery juxtaposed in a haunting, lyrical word dance.


  16. gspottedpen says:

    The imagery is very exquisite planting a fruit of irony to perfection. Anand Bose from India.

    Liked by 1 person

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