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  1. ‘Nights that hog stars from city streets’, such a powerful piece. Loved it.

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  2. Loved it. Elizabeth is right, that line is very powerful. So much beauty lost, nature is so energising, electricity? Not so much.


  3. Loved the packed in bits- asphalt/ paved was immediately arresting- the imagery juxtaposed in a haunting, lyrical word dance.


  4. The imagery is very exquisite planting a fruit of irony to perfection. Anand Bose from India.

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