Posted on April 1, 2016
by Elan Mudrow
Category: Poetry, UncategorizedTags: Blog, Gardens, Home, Lawns, Life, Love, Poem, Poetry, Writing
I love your page.
I like how you look at things, and everyday objects and the personification of them at times. I am enjoying your writing so far.
You have such a clever way with words. Enjoyed this!
I love UN-perfect. If I had a garden, it would be EXACTLY this poem. Wild and willful and beautiful with places to hide for the kids and benches over grown with morning glories to rest on. Simply: YES. Wonderful and refreshing 🙂
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Love it, it is a perfect fit! 🙂
Yes to more weeds and overgrowth. love it!
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Title and picture perfect accompaniments to your poem. I love all the “wild” weed flowers. Delightful ending – messing up the flowerbed. 🙂
Wonderfully played out metaphor!
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Love the vintage artwork!
You had me from the first line! I absolutely loved this poem…and picture! By all means, do carry on! 🙂
I think things must be different in your area then. Our local lawn cutting service always supplies a pretty girl to assist with the mowing as shown above. My wife doesn’t like it, though, so now I have to do it all by myself! I must say, though, it’s easier that now, the girl just kept getting in the way.
I enjoyed the poem, Feels a bit rebellious, like “I just want to be me. Leave me alone or I’ll do something neither of us want.” I’m not sure I’d want to cuddle with the thistles.
The analogies in this poem are terrific. Nice writing.
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What a great piece of writing. It must have been such a joy to finish and see your garden in bloom💜. Happy spring time!
Yeah, I tried suggesting this to the wife, but she wasn’t keen. Said something about how I should put in a rose garden instead. Hmm.
Made me laugh. I enjoy the images and action portrayed here!
Yeah, been there, done that but all my help needed showers and shaves before they showed up for work. You can imagine what a day in the sun was like…:)
You are one lucky nursery.
I would agree Frank
I guess some people receive all the luck. Maybe the two in the image run a lawn management service. You know, the companies that drive around in pickup trucks with a trailer full of lawnmowers.
Loved this! Here’s to messy flowerbeds! Which mine always are…!
Just love this one, Elan. Best for awhile (I think, but who am I?)
Oddly reminds me of how the world’s best women soccer players were forced to play on artificial turf last year, another way of “edging” them in compared to their male compatriots.
multilevel poem propagated with picture perfect accompaniment….vitally vernal
Love the photo; but I must say, I never had any help that looked like that cutting my grass. You described most of what grows freely in my yard…:)
I absolutely love this. You are brilliant. I am looking forward to reading a lot more. Thank you.
Love the ‘picture perfect’ photo!
A great Poem
The wildness of nature is what makes it so beautiful and compelling. Who wants ChemLawn? NOT ME!
Me too (common ragwort …!!!).
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