Funny Kind Of Heaven

Giulietta Masina in Fellini's La Strada
Giulietta Masina in Fellini’s La Strada

You know,

when I look at you

I laugh

Not because you’re a fool

Although you can be foolish.

Not because you’re a clown You juggle just fine.

Not because you tell good jokes

Sometimes you get lucky.

Not because you’re silly

There’s a bit of a child in you.

Not because you can’t match socks

(I’ll let that one slide).

It’s because I love

The hell out of you!

Funny kind of heaven

We’ve got going on between us.


55 thoughts on “Funny Kind Of Heaven”

  1. Thanks. Beta readers and/or workshops have their place. Don’t depend on them too much. It’s easy for a writer to fall into the trap of wanting to write “like” a professional, as they see this is a way to publication. I think it’s more important to work on your own voice and find a way through it. Good luck!


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