Excellent! And, I especially love the last line. 🙌
That is actually a theme of a current project, using Recombinant Theory, and working with dispossessed people in my area, remixing lexemes from Trump and Clinton’s speeches. Not sure if I’m producing anything as entertaining – this one was fun to read. I enjoyed the form of each turned phrase.
Indeed! I tend to like my linguistics topped with a little tomato sauce.
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This was great fun – especially the last line! H x
This is fantastic!! What a whimsical journey. Truely wonderful read.
Thanks so much!
My absolute pleasure!! Best post I’ve read today!!
Mind blowing words!!
Beautiful, I especially loved the one about silence, but in truth all had me read, nod and say “mhm!” a lot of times 🙂
Entertainment is not a poem, however, this poem is very entertaining!
Ahh, that’s what I forgot. I was going to ask others to join in. Thanks
brilliant! You might not be a poem,
You are a poet.
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This poem is very entertaining and great fun!
Beautiful. So true that a poem does not feed a starving artist. And I loved that some of it depends upon a red wheel-barrow.
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Hey poets, this poem by Mudrow is beautiful. Check it out
There is a famous poem by a starving artist, which goes:
sadly he died..
Ok, poor attempt at humour. This on the other hand was brilliantly funny and obviously highly intelligent loved it.
Love the sneeze!
Delightful epigrams! One overlooked aspect of poetry is fun with language (I have a post coming up about that), and the monogamy—you’ve set me to the task of whoring in rhyme and meter.
I love the playfulness. Some of lines left me laughing.
Especially the last!
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Some poems can be dull
This poem is great fun!
I love your twists and whimsy. I also especially like the last two lines. Thanks for a good laugh. 🙂
loved it, the humour had punch in the end. poetry can be fun and contemporary. thanks for reminding.
Hahahah! Awesome!! 😀
Fun to read!
Very witty! 🙂
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So creative! I absolutely love it!
“A poem should attempt to rewrite Donald Trump” LOL Love it
I really like this one, Elan!
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