Modern Relationship

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58 Responses to Modern Relationship

  1. Good grief! (Good satire)

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  2. sailajaP14 says:

    You said it all!😂

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  3. Yaay!! To this… complete truth and total win

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  5. Jessie says:

    I love this poetic commentary on modern relationships. As a single young adult, I feel this pain. I love your line “Cause that’s how we roll– with no dice.”

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  6. crimsonprose says:

    Has to be rated amongst your best!

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  7. shimmy440 says:

    Brilliant. I’d be up for putting this on AlgebraOfOwls if you’re interested.

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  8. Sips her coffee smiling, and wishing she had written this post. Well done! G-uno

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  9. We are all starving for love in the flesh, yeah. Great poem. Thanks.

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  10. pearlgirl says:

    Good one! Only if i could catch a pokemon on your blog 🙂

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  11. foodinbooks says:

    Brilliant! And so true (sadly).

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  12. Man, this is just brilliant.

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  13. This has made my day! ” tweet the heat!”

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  14. Fu@% yeah. You nailed it on that one. I love the economy of words and depth of meaning. Social commentary on a huge scale but in few words.

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  15. egonotthere says:

    This is so true, Thank you for writing this!

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  16. This is excellent, spot on sad, but true. Whatever happened to real talking?

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  17. Robyn Haynes says:

    Ain’t that the truth – indeed!

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  18. lifecameos says:

    This is so brilliant ! And it is not really satire either !

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  19. Bang on! And bingo! What a post!

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  20. cjlanger says:

    Excellent work, masterful play on words, and sad commentary on our relationships have been reduced to “sound bites”. This is a piece that needs to be reread several times to get the full meaning. Wonderful!!

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  21. Phil Huston says:

    “We’re just like the news, baby”
    This is almost the haiku version of the entire piece. Nice analogizing.

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  22. Rabia says:

    I love this poem it’s spot on! 144 characters is for Twitter?

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  23. Thank god for poetry.
    JP

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  24. 144 words to tweet our heat, is perfect!

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  25. Marsha says:

    Another hilarious post. Too bad it’s true!!!!

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  26. vivachange77 says:

    Terrific! The medium is the message.

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  27. Karen McGarr says:

    So clever, I just loved this!

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  28. falos3 says:

    Well written

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  29. Very cool. I don’t understand how love develops nowadays- I really don’t. My now ex partner and I echanged over 100,000 words in emails before we even met, and at least half as many once we did, and we still managed to part through mis-communication hahaha

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  30. You pinned modern relationships

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  31. sanberdooboy says:

    Love it! My favorite lines: Boasts and all the toasts/ As well as that trip to the coast.

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  32. fruslera says:

    My Favourite of yours

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  33. I’m new to your site and of the recent posts I read, this is my favorite. It mentions all I love and hate about social media. I heard it recited by Maya Angelou in my head. My brain does that when I connect with something, plays audio.

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  34. javerya98 says:

    Hahaha wow this is soo cool

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  35. melabec says:

    This is awesome!

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  37. poperi says:

    Ha, spot on. (Or rather: i ❤ , heart of which would align better on my phone.)

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  38. Thanks for the read – total truth x

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  40. Accidental Soulmate says:

    Amazing work love the take on the modern relationship

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  41. nkatekof says:

    This is the reality of modern relationships. Spot on!

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  42. This is SO Good✌ “We only have 144 words to tweet the heat” and “We are just like the news baby, ain’t that the truth?” , are my favourite lines!

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  43. Melissa says:

    By golly, you’ve nailed it!! Cheers!

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