Hmn! Hi Elan, my name is Amie. And I agree..it was intense…reading it without saying it made it all the more loud’er’? See you around 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person
Is it odd that I instantly started reading this aloud, through the line breaks? Beautiful prose when spoken aloud following punctuation though. I’m not sure if it was on purpose, but I like it. LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks. I would like to think you’re reading in a concentric way. That’s one thing I aim for. LikeLike
Your words always leave me thinking and circling back for another read. Thank you. LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m honored.
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To be honest, I’m not much for poetry.
But with this, I’m smitten.
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Beautiful
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Hmn! Hi Elan, my name is Amie.
And I agree..it was intense…reading it without saying it made it all the more loud’er’? See you around 🙂
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That was….intense.
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Brilliant. Looking toward to more.
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Wow! Incredible ❤ ❤
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Is it odd that I instantly started reading this aloud, through the line breaks?
Beautiful prose when spoken aloud following punctuation though. I’m not sure if it was on purpose, but I like it.
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“Their chaos id recorded, looped and sampled,” love it!
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Silence is bliss
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Thanks. I would like to think you’re reading in a concentric way. That’s one thing I aim for.
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Your words always leave me thinking and circling back for another read. Thank you.
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I’m one of those people overly sensitive to noise!
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I love how you used words to show all the layers of noise.
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Marvelous.
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splendid
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