Smidgens
Volumes of discussions done
Words have been ditched
Along the convenient shore
By the images we abhor
Who Dig out words at low tide
Constantly consonant, foul on the vowel
Slipping through the hippest lips
Without a stutter, lisp,……….creating hits,
Files full of future teleprompt air
With the utmost care, fonts as thin as hair
Free verse, sometimes perverse
Or preoccupied by its own purse
Taxations on the bipolar rich and poor,
We listen to the giddy whore…. Of our own
Goofiness, measuring watchers, polling who’s there
Just when you think someone cares
We turn back to Bumblr, Facecrook
And Goofy Plus, our stick-made nook
To utter and give forth, to fish
In the stream of eternal bitching
Seems like witches burning
On the electric rotisserie, then
You try to turn it off and be free
At least given the words to disagree
But, we are in the desolate lands of the unlistenable
Discourse has been hijacked into the subliminal
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Not only liked, but liked a lot. Very effective choices of words and phrases; you say so much in each! A fine piece of poetry–I’d give it an A++.
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Really damn good. Congrats Elan!
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‘Free verse, sometimes perverse, or preoccupied with its on purse,
Taxation on the bipolar rich and poor’
My favourite line it shows how anyone can do it and the many ways they can, all really with the same effect.
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Very fierce.
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that’s what’s happening in the world right now, we’d all become, too hooked on social media, that we might as well have the needle stuck into our arms, with a case or however those illegal substances are united close by, ready for more refills, and the thing is, we all need to have self-control, to not get lured into this state of dependency that we’re all, faced with right now.
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You describe he current social media situation so accurately.
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I really like this image, it compliments your words perfectly. Let your words be free!
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yes, I don’t speak up that much in public anymore… I’ve been behaviorally conditioned to smile and nod, and avoid chit-chat. Occasionally, there is a rare soul that I seem to be in sync with and we make complementary comments or observations, but for the most part, we’re ghosts suffering from PTSD from previous encounters.
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“Without being offered an accusation in its place”. Yes. And I see this played out, not only with such things as a presidential debate, but also in our daily “discourse” with one another.
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yes. rhetoric is a skill that has long been forgotten, and only the fallacies have survived for things like that presidential debacle last night. can we please just have a question answered without being offered an accusation in its’ place? it’s like watching kids at a playground say, “I know you are, but what am I?”
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You give eloquent voice to what so many of us are thinking. I’m sick of debates and social media where everybody wants to talk and nobody wants to listen. As a civil servant for 24 years, under 8 different bosses, I know it is possible to wait out even the most untenable situation. 🙂
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“we are in the desolate lands of the unlistenable” – This is the line that resonates with me. A sad state of affairs.
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Apparently we have all become victims of the national rhetoric.
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Given that we’re in the “hurricane winds” of political madness, this is painfully applicable …
“You try to turn it off and be free
At least given the words to disagree
But, we are in the desolate lands of the unlistenable
Discourse has been hijacked into the subliminal”
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