This is a really beautiful, poignant piece. You say so much with so few words, each lexical choice serving a purpose – I especially liked your use of ‘barefoot’, as it invokes a sense of nature, but also a sense of gentleness/softness/safety as they are able to walk that way without getting hurt or cut. The picture is great too; I love the vibrant colours! 🙂
Beautiful
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Reblogged this on travelingeyes.
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Short and poignant, just like yours truly 😉 I dig it
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Thanks so much!!
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Beautiful flower picture and poem. Well done. Followed you by e-mail
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Your poem shows that so mich can be in said in just a few powerful words👍
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Little moments of calm in your words. Thanks.
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Sigh. Thank You. So lovely.
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Gardens are obviously needed!!
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Lovely 😊
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My favorite lines,
“We grow in common ground.
Share the dirt.”
This says so much with few words.
Thank you for the spirit of unity.
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Sweet Elan! Please read my latest post -Unique Blogger Award. I’m only interested that you read the post as it is partly directed to you. Thanks.
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This is fantastic! Love it!
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Wonderfully positive words for our troubled times. I love the primary colors in the picture.
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Nice imagery.
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This is a really beautiful, poignant piece. You say so much with so few words, each lexical choice serving a purpose – I especially liked your use of ‘barefoot’, as it invokes a sense of nature, but also a sense of gentleness/softness/safety as they are able to walk that way without getting hurt or cut. The picture is great too; I love the vibrant colours! 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Love this and the timing couldn’t be more perfect! This poem speaks to me..
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Such a beautiful poem. Absolutely love the simplicity.
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This is really beautiful.
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Amen
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Thanks!!!
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beautiful!!
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Beautifully expressed Elan!
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Amen
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Reblogged this on davidbruceblog and commented:
Well done. Keep everywhere weird and the dirt soft.
Reblogged on davidbruceblog.
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So earthy and profound,
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Well done.
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Beautiful
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Loved your poem!
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One planet. One people. One day.
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Oh! What you can do with lens! It makes love through the viewer and your prose seduces thoughts that resonate!
So nice. 🙂
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Just gorgeous!
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LOl. No. Just hard work. Although, sometimes I like to pretend. Thanks so much!
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Incredible. Sent shivers down my spine! What a great message from such beautiful words
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Excellent! 😎😎😎
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How do you write so well? Are you a magician?
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Today a garden is needed indeed. Short and so meaningful.
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This was really good. “Today, a garden is needed”, aint that the truth!
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You have crafted something so moving with so few words! Envious of your efficiency, it’s beautiful.
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I dig it broski!
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I like the simple brevity. Thanks for sharing.
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Powerful.
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