Before the unfurling

The inward bloom

An artist’s fist

Compressed to the movement

Of skin and desire

Held to earth

By fragile stem

One day will

Follow the sun

Learn to lure the bee

Speak in soft flesh tones….

And landing upon transitory beauty


Only representations

Are permanent.

Form, structure, pigments.

A ghost’s body

Still holds the shape

Of hands outlined, flat

Upon the prehistoric cave

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14 Responses to Unfurling

  1. Disa Rastogi says:

    Hi…A very well written poem with deep meanings. The unfurling here represents to me a lot and manifests itself in many forms like a newborn, an artist in making and so on.


  2. Mel Gutiér says:

    Unfurling… one of my favorite images. 😊


  3. This is one of your most disciplined, therefor efficient poems. You haven’t tried for too much, but have allowed the thought to unfurl economically and beautifully. You have given something.


  4. dornahainds says:

    Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀


  5. vivachange77 says:

    Stunning images in your poem. The picture is just right for your words.


  6. floweringink says:

    This is beautiful; it has an ethereal quality until the very end where it is so firmly grounded. Great movement and imagery- I love the line, “speak in soft flesh tones…”.

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  7. debracolby52 says:

    This was a simple but elegant piece. Thank you for stopping by and liking my recent post!


  8. Reblogged this on Write to Inspire and commented:
    Four years after I wrote When Pleasure Blooms, along comes the perfect poetic synopsis.

    Thank you for Unfurling the Bloom, Elan Mudrow!


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