Smidgens
We think the river a wild beast, amok, tilling a path in soil.
But it’s us—in another form, searching for a mate who can only be made in our own image.
We slow the stream, to a reservoir’s pulse, in hope to drink reflections—until the end of our days.
Yet, days are a slight of hand, manmade lakes, built, so we can sing to the photogenic current.
Stilled, captured in a portrait
Touched, retouched, retold
Lovely images. Thanks for the post.
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The emotions echo with the landscape … beautifully written.
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I like the title which, for me (having read the book), ties into us as questionable creators manipulating nature and natural laws (here with water) with the end results not as good for us as we intended, though we probably can’t even see the damages because we are so far gone… Super thought-provoking, as usual.
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Beautifully written and moving! Thank you for this.
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Brava.. 😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Words, photo… Frankenstein! Perfect!
I am feeling these end lines of yours.
“Touched, retouched, retold”
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Reblogged this on AreMyFeetOffTheGround and commented:
This beautiful piece of insight is by Elan Murrow.
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This is so beautiful! For me, it captured the pure ambitions of a human’s endless search to find a soulmate or something fulfilling for their soul. I really loved it!
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“Touched, retouched, retold.
Lovely.
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This is really great.
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From Wikipedia : ” Symmetry (from Greek συμμετρία) . In everyday language refers to a sense of harmonious and beautiful proportion and balance ” Yes it is ..
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We think the river a wild beast, amok, tilling a path in soil.
But it’s us—in another form, searching for a mate who can only be made in our own image.: Αmazingly penned!
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A little Promethius.
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