Smidgens
There’s a quietness about the river
broken by a random leap, splash of steelheads.
a prairie hawk loses a feather.
The natives drink a loud liquor
on their fishing platforms, dip nets
looking for fish who choose
to become parts of ceremonies.
The valley refracts strong light
that moves with the quiet.
Hills are made of dead gold,
skeleton orchards, lost spirit guides.
Bear scat litters small pastures
where the river overruns its banks,
forming shallow pools.
I’m cautious like a fool and listen.
The sun sets earlier here.
I knew that going in
I’m searching for rain or shadows
They only last for a short period.
My phone drops, small echo
Black screen on slick green moss
I yell for some reason
Maybe to prove I can make a sound
The sun throbs red…west…hovers
next to the peak of Mt. Hood.
Highway 14 yanks at me with its noise
where occasional deer lie still
on the shoulder of its pavement,
small trickle of blood in their teeth.
Dusk is as good as night here.
I run.
Amazing, by Indonesia
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Great read. I especially like these lines. “I yell for some reason
Maybe to prove I can make a sound”
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Amazingly great poem!
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I like the way that discrete images bond to make a whole.
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Beautiful
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Fantastic
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Eerie. Excellent. I love the atmosphere.
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Thanks Anna. There were a lot of signs that day…on that river…in the desert…running with the dying daylight. It covered a few of your top ten tactics, if you know what I mean. Portland would love to have you visit.
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This is beautiful, and feels like a sign. There have been a few little pings from the Universe lately re: Portland. I guess it’s time to take a trip.
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Thanks so much!!
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Superb, Elan! Story, images, sensory, enthralling really! 🙂
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👏💕
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And just like that, I’m in nature! Lovely poem, Elan. So rich with detail! 🙂
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thank you for bringing me back to a magical place in my memory ❤
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More than water, deeper than a phone, bigger than Mt Hood. Many years were waiting for this poem, and many skills rubbed against. Beautiful and dark. thanks
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Thanks.
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Great capture of the spirit of the place Elan.
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Sweet to bring tears.
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The river is a gorgeous blue. Your poetry runs like a tributary flowing into it. Beautiful images.
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This one’s the kind i like! I’ll keep re-reading for a while..
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Lovely. I like this.
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Glorious sounds for mouthing and hearing.
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Very beautiful and nice poetry. Thanks
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Eerie.
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Reminds me of fishing up on Mt Hood as a kid.
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Thanks!
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Every part of this poem was so soulful. Exquisite!
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This is where I live, so I love the imagery of our beautiful Pacific Northwest!!!
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I enjoyed this. It captures many of the feelings I have had deep in the Sierras.
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You’re very welcome.
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Thanks so much!!
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This is beautifully captured in words.
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Brilliant
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And the Hits just keep on coming ! Images and words. Under the magnet on my refrigerator, on a scrap of paper, will be written, ” I yell for some reason, Maybe to prove I can make a sound” … Wow !
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