Smidgens
Posted on October 20, 2019 by Elan Mudrow
The sun is dull today, grey clouds and a cold, cold rain.
Thrushes scatter from tree to tree…scolding me. Witch hazel fades to orange, then red. Oak leaves are starved skeletons and thistles appear as brittle, brown tubes.
The spring with its wild water, waiting for movement. It’ll run all the way to the river in winter. Now, I follow its small pools, footprints along blackish stone.
I see a little blunt of blue poke through the clouds, bright tips of silver, frame dark billows. Moving, always moving.
I relinquish. Dig my hands deep within cotton pockets, nuzzle a soft scarf.
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Very well written, you have a gift for writing
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Nice imagery and diction.
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good rythem.
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Love the alliteration and internal rhyme. Universal images of fall.
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Your words and images wonderfully suit the season. I like how you describe the flow of water.
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At first the sense of loss and then the acceptance of that’s the way it is in the last line the transit to enjoying autumn and the coming winter for its own unique qualities. Wonderful imagery.
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Beautiful
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“Oak leaves are starved skeletons and thistles appear as brittle, brown tubes.” Love this line especially. Very nice!
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Thanks!!
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Beautiful poem for Fall.
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Nicely done – image matches the text perfectly.
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Thanks!!
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Your imagery and tone in this poem are just fantastic.
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Thanks!!
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Great words and photograph . . .
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Thanks so much!!
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This is lovely. 🙂
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